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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-10-12 05:59 PM



The lure of smile teases me
peaking curiosity.
The man, the picture perfect
has engaged my thoughts of late.

I see in stance, in glance
slight of sadness
haunt of past, and my heart
it yearns to know, and
my feelings threat to show.

In a dream, my hands
long to reach, I want to breathe
in space of him to know,
to feel, to ease sorrow.

Confused, I keep a distance
I do not want. Would rather plot
and plan a tryst, clandestine
yet must keep desire hidden,

away from the lure of smile
and those eyes that speak to me.


WhiteRose

"The first rule of poetry, write what you know."

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-10-12 06:26 PM


Oh this so reminds me of Liam. This poem made me smile

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-10-12 08:34 PM


Little fantasies such as these keep life interesting! We can be naughty in our thoughts but not in our deeds! tehe

EA

Opoetry4me
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Dixon, Ky USA
3 posted 2002-10-12 08:48 PM


I Love it! Makes my heart say ohh! How sweet!


ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-10-12 09:20 PM


Such well chosen words here, to delight the imagination...Trist...Enjoyed!!
ThisDiamond

scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2002-10-12 09:28 PM


"kept a distance
I do not want."   how often does that happen in life...just think of all the missed chances...lovely thoughts expressed here.

...believe what your heart feels.....

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-12 09:37 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I just love this, sweet friend, yes, I know how you feel, how you just want to know what the other is thinking and the curiousity can be so overwhelming! (kiss on cheek) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-05-03 04:12 AM


wonderful!
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