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Composition In Early Autumn
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Composition In Early Autumn |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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"Color directly influences the soul" and can "produce a correspondent spiritual vibration" -Kandinsky . . . . Leaves in Fall before the acrobatics lend brittle voices to a boisterous choir, non-denomination quite chromatic thick'ning clouds and blues backdrop their fire, in sea like rustlings music's of the air the rusts and reds and yellows all ignite til cooler winds will sway the trees to bare and Winter swaddle all in long dark night, until that time the boughs will broom the sky and hikers will 'neath stain glass ceilings pass enchanted, even shade yields hues of sighs, the downcast too view carpet's colors mass a season even dullards find a muse, the forlorn may forget the Love they lose. [This message has been edited by RSWells (10-12-2002 11:17 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No criticism, just do a little spell checking, and you'll have one happy reader here... I certainly enjoyed knowing that even dullards would pen poetic, under the right auspices... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Please Sunshine lighten what's left of my day and lead me to my error. Thanks. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Well, I'm not Sunshine, but check the spelling of boisterous. Images come to life with your pen! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sandpiper makes a good Sunshine, don't you think? Yep, that's the one! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Outstanding! As an avid hiker---I love it! As an avid reader and writer of poetry---I love it! As an artist with an appreciation of color and it's visual and vibratory impact---I love it! EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Agreed...Outstanding You have captured the essence of the season so well my friend. A celebration indeed. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Mr. Wells... Your use of wonderful imagery takes the reader there. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
OOPS!! Must be Lizpepsic. Thanks Ladies. And thanks for the encouraging replies. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RSWells - I will miss the colors this year, as I'm in Arizona. But I see colors in the desert, and it's very beautiful... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
....the boughs will broom the sky... I like this any so many more of your lines. This is perfect and was so into reading and enjoying didn't even notice the mechanics of the thing. Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
A better picture Monet could not have painted. Well done and much enjoyed. SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice..thanks for sharing |
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