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Tell Her Your Heart
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Tell Her Your Heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 And with the touch of feather’s quill To parchment , flow of ink Words to make beating hearts still Cleverest of minds, think Touch now the book, leather bound Fill more than your eyes This treasure rare, found Centuries old, without revise First edition, only book ever wrote And here, dedication To his love, in lavish denote Romantic in revelation His love, vivid devotion Ever, my heart does weep Swept away with emotion I shall forever keep Fragile, his testimony Words of love, too late spoken Aching with, “if only” Timeless words, now a token Speak, without hesitation ‘fore she should depart Without reservation Tell her, tell her your heart ~SEA~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Susan, it's so great to see you again, yay, I have missed your smile so so much! It is so sad to see so many show unrequited love and I encourage all to share heir hearts to the ones they love and find a response of certainty and love in return! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - I touched the book, my heart wept but then smiled as I saw her there. Lovely write SEA... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Susan...so nice to see you! I love this, and how true... we should tell those we love how we feel now.. rather than later to be left thinking...'if only' Very beautifully penned... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful poem....and Beautiful picture. Enjoyed so much. DeaDiAmore |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Such pretty images this gives me, sweetie.  A very good choice of a picture, too. *hugs* and The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
SeaGal, just last week, i felt attracted to a print, painted by Mary Cassatt, that struck me: the eyes like Mona Lisa. It was if, just your poem did just a few minutes ago, like someone was able to open my feelings from a locked vault, and let it melt over the image. Jeff |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah~ thank you dear heart BC~ so glad you liked this one Nancy~ thank you for reading and enjoying DeaDiAmore~thank you Michael~ thank you very much Jeff~ thank you so much for your wonderful reply, you made me smile |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Every day, this is what is needed. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susan this is so very lovely not to mention so very well done. The graphic is perfectly matched to your words. Hugs. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Nice to see you posting again and a lovely one at that.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual.. lovely work.. so nice to see you again gracing us with the beauty of your heart. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA - this is beautiful. So nice to read your work once again. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Speak, without hesitation ‘fore she should depart Without reservation Tell her, tell her your heart he who hesitates is lost and I never wish to regret it. Good to see you SEA~ and thank you for never failing to strike a chord. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With your feather quill you touch me. EA |
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FuzzyFrazzledFraggle Member
since 2002-09-20
Posts 155Fraggle Rock |
just magic, loved it Consider yourself fuzzed |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..SEA../\..thanks, enjoyed reading; poem is very good; songlike../\..Spiros ----------------lyric------- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, this is a very beautiful poem...but so sad to me. We should never fail to tell people we love them (if we, in fact, do), because we never know if we'll have another chance. Thanks for sharing your poem. Love To All, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-24-2002 01:12 AM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, as always such beauty from you. this was just so charming and romantic...then again there is no romance poem like a Sea-poem! just gorgeous hon, but then again so is your heart, so how could this not be. love you. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is so special and the picture is just stunning. Very nice writing ... Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SEA~ Very lovely poem. What treasures we find in old diaries, dresser drawers and attics...Paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, SEA! Both, the picture and the poem. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, so lovely to hear from you once again, and in such a beautiful format Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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