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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-11-02 06:41 PM


Unwanted and Unneeded

All he wanted was for the
truth of love to be revealed.
Is this or is this not
true love that he feels.
He feels his experiences
with love have left him
unimpressed and unfulfilled
and he has concerns that his
love life is a  mess that has
provided him with unwanted
pain and unneeded stress.

JamesLee
November01
2002


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-11-02 06:50 PM


I knew how that felt back in June and July. Long story. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-02 07:04 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I think so many can relate to this, sweet friend, we all want to be loved yet some of us fail to think of the responsibilities and risks that are involved and it can be stressful at times! (sigh) This is so well-expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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3 posted 2002-11-04 10:21 AM


Enjoyed!

God bless!

AniKay83
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4 posted 2002-11-07 04:02 AM


That's a whole lot of sorrow for such a small poem. Does a man of few words often have a large story to tell, though?

I enjoyed this.

Much love,
~Krissie

"No one has ever loved ~anyone~ the way ~everyone~ wants to be loved"
~Mignon McLaughlin~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2005-02-10 06:38 PM


Thank you all for the nice responses...glad I'm past this... James
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