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Rustled Minutes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Rustled Minutes The moonset old cotton colored to yellow starched and pressed a slight pattern of age mottled into its circle slips into the western hills as the old oak tree rustles minutes catching the dawn as she takes over the sky on the other side of morning I watch it gather the shadows and turn his dusky face to pale and think capture the space between |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"The space between"...yes. Nicely done, Martie. Bob |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is exellent Martie  Beautiful imagery, I love viewing the moments through your eyes.hugs Maree |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I expected to see perfection when I saw the title as the old oak tree rustles minutes catching the dawn as she takes over the sky on the other side of morning Again, I was right.  Always a pleasure to read you Martie. I know that you can 'read' me |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hope all is well with you.... the poem is lovely... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartiSis~ 'The moonset old cotton colored to yellow starched and pressed a slight pattern of age mottled into its circle' Indeed ! Exquisite MzMoonieGirl~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, your poems are always so perfect. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very nice, Martie. Reflective - filled with nature. I love how you never let a day go by without appreciating nature. Cor |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Took this just last night, Martie... must have known, you think?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Martie... Your writing never fails to astound me! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The moonset old cotton colored to yellow starched and pressed ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now this is a unique vision of the moon. Very lovely writing! Deb |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What wonder fills me when I discover the weave of thought and heart in your works. Such a beautiful discovery. ThisDiamond |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You should have been a painter....not the house variety either...though I am quite sure you could have painted a home as well. Beautifully done Martie girl.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Martie, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, your beautiful words always make all the bright lights illuminate! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hi Marti, Liked the description of the moon. and also especially liked: "The space between"... So creative, you are. Enjoyed much and re-reading each time, more pleasurable. Hugs to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie~ Beautiful as always, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how well you regard your surroundings and how well you express so many ways to see them - loved this - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Martie... I think you could turn the most ordinary event into a verbal paradise with your lovely words  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great images created in this write...words illuminating my screen.. ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - a lovely thought to capture the space in between... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes the space between is all there is....or the space before, as here. This poem is beautiful, and true to the real of things. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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