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~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-10-20 02:03 AM

They were
washed clean
by a host
of heavenly
creature's tears
distraught by loves
aching denial
Perhaps these two
shall meet again
& give heaven back
her smile

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-10-20 02:24 AM

You've a nice way with words ~K

welcome to the blue~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-20 07:54 AM

This is priceless. So very well done.
Love the message; it makes me smile!

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-20 08:37 AM

K....thanks for the beautiful poem. Welcome to this "family of friends" here at Passions In Poetry. I hope you like it here.
Love To All,
Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-10-20 09:21 AM

Very lovely words ~K
Welcome to Passions.
~Hugs~

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

5 posted 2002-10-20 04:46 PM

I Love this place! I have never felt more welcome anywhere! Thank you all so much for your kind words. I see there is so much talent here I will be kept very busy reading your poetry & checking out home pages. Thank you all again!

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

6 posted 2002-10-22 03:40 PM

Welcome to PIP ~K
This is a fantastic piece of work.
It made me feel at peace in a strange way.
Look forwward to more of your work.

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-22 05:41 PM

(sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful with a tinge of sadness, sweet friend, I sure hope they get back together again as this is so lovely and angelic as their love is destined to be! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, yay, I'm so happy you're here posting as you are a special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2002-10-22 06:09 PM

Whew!!! what a sad story and so beautifully written. Brevity was your best play here. Incredible descriptions!!! set me to tears..
This one is going into my treasurebox.
{{{Hugs}}}
Ps. welcome to passions

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.
http://home.c

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2002-11-16 02:46 AM

~K,

Fine piece.
Better'n that, really

wranx

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

10 posted 2002-11-16 02:55 AM

Ah, a gentle blast from the past! Thanks for that!

Krystopher Morris
Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 130
Ancient land called Chivalry

11 posted 2002-11-16 04:20 AM

Very Nice. I enjoyed it much!

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