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Fee
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-18 07:38 AM



Locked away the pain
Bound by the tears
Trust has been broken
Faith lost throughout the years

Protected is you heart
Under lock and key
It’s been hurt before
Its easy for me to see.

You need to try again
This I understand
That’s what makes you
the most incredible man.

Please just be careful
Not to shatter what is left
For you are worth much more
Please promise not to forget.

If you ever need me
You know just where I am
Look inside your locked heart
You will find I found my way in.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2002 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-10-18 07:57 AM


Fee,
very heartfelt poem.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-10-18 11:10 AM


Very good poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-10-18 11:19 AM


Very heartfelt not to mention wise words.  Thank you for sharing.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-05-03 04:26 AM


very comforting write
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