Open Poetry #23 |
Whispers in the Wind |
DarkShroud Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 15 |
I can't whisper in your ear, my thoughts, worrys or concerns. But I can whisper them into the wind, And hope they will reach you. For I know the wind, Will carry my words to you. But whether you listen is another story. I hope my words will reach you. DS 10-17-02 May you laugh, but not too much; May you live with relish, And may you love with all you have! [This message has been edited by DarkShroud (10-17-2002 07:56 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful wish. For words to be carried on the wind, and even more, for them to be heard. Very nice. |
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DarkShroud Junior Member
since 2002-09-25
Posts 15 |
WhiteRose------thank you very much! DS May you laugh, but not too much; |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Avi......I like this one very much! friends always Sharon Words are my medicine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I did not have to read your poem. A gentle breeze carried your words through my open window and were whispered into my ear---and I liked what I heard! Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Avayon, I loved this poem. I could almost feel the wind and hear your whispers. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the whispered feel of this. Nice to meet you, DS. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Avayon~ Welcome to the family circle of Passions ! This is simply a lovely piece of word-thoughts~ I sure hope to see more of your writing~ *Hugs* of encouragement~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they will |
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