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DarkShroud
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since 2002-09-25
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0 posted 2002-10-17 07:53 PM


I can't whisper in your ear,
my thoughts, worrys or concerns.
But I can whisper them into the wind,
And hope they will reach you.
For I know the wind,
Will carry my words to you.
But whether you listen is another story.
I hope my words will reach you.

DS
10-17-02

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

[This message has been edited by DarkShroud (10-17-2002 07:56 PM).]

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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-10-17 08:59 PM


A wonderful wish. For words to be carried on the wind, and even more, for them to be heard. Very nice.
DarkShroud
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2 posted 2002-10-17 09:59 PM


WhiteRose------thank you very much!

DS

May you laugh, but not too much;
May you live with relish,
And may you love with all you have!

Enotneicna
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3 posted 2002-10-17 10:13 PM


Avi......I like this one very much!
friends always
Sharon

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!



Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-18 12:17 PM


I did not have to read your poem. A gentle breeze carried your words through my open window and were whispered into my ear---and I liked what I heard!

Earth Angel

garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-10-18 12:36 PM


Avayon, I loved this poem. I could almost feel the wind and hear your whispers. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

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Gaia
6 posted 2002-10-18 02:58 AM


I love the whispered feel of this.
Nice to meet you, DS.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-10-18 11:34 AM


Avayon~

Welcome to the family circle of Passions !
This is simply a lovely piece of word-thoughts~
I sure hope to see more of your writing~
*Hugs* of encouragement~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2004-05-03 04:25 AM


they will
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