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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-10-17 09:26 PM


“TO GIVE TO YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My heart would
be forever
taken if yours
would open to mine,
never more would
either know of
darkness, for I share
the love of sensual
romance, not fleeing,
but to be there
with tenderness,
to caress a place
deep inside with
the caring
of one that not
only knows,
but does understand...
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2002-10-17 09:27 PM


beautiful
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2 posted 2002-10-17 09:39 PM


Just lovely Bill. Enjoyed. Chris

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SmartChick
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3 posted 2002-10-17 10:00 PM


This is so beautiful.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-17 10:05 PM


Words that any women would want to hear and knowing that they came from your heart.

EA

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5 posted 2002-10-17 11:42 PM




(sigh) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, I wish there were more men like you in the world who could "understand" a womans heart as that is what true love is, to not only appreciate but feel. (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may true love always shine in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-10-18 02:45 AM


Bill, this is so beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
Love To All,
Ethel

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2002-10-18 07:34 AM



Bill
Romantic writing, so lovely in thought
Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone had such thoughts.
Liz

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8 posted 2002-10-18 08:04 AM


A passionate expression of true love...very well written...

...believe what your heart feels...

Kethry
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9 posted 2002-10-18 08:27 AM


Bill,
you are a king when it comes to romantic writing like this.
Kethry

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10 posted 2002-10-18 08:37 AM


Very nicely done Bill...enjoyed.
~Hugs~

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  So you won't ever forget me ~

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11 posted 2004-05-03 04:27 AM


beautiful!
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