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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-18 03:36 AM

MY WORDS SO INADEQUATE
by Ethel

My words, so inadequate
to describe my love
for you

Love that is true
Forever love
I'm amazed by it

Real
Togetherness
Hearts bonded

Hands held
Fingers entwined
Lips together in a kiss

Arms circled around
Bodies pressed close
Together

Eyes
Looking into depths
Of our beings

So inadequate
My words
To describe my love
For you

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-18-2002 03:37 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-10-18 03:44 AM

Ethel,
But something tells me they'll do just fine. I her compassion and passion all mingled together. How does it get better than that?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-18 03:47 AM

Thanks, Larry. I guess you could see that I was trying something new with my words of love. I still mean them with all my heart, though. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Love To All,
Ethel

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-10-18 07:02 AM

Sounds to me with this poem like the two of you are one....

that is quite adequate! Thank God we don't have to earn love, huh?

Warm Hugs,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2002-10-18 07:46 AM

Lovely words...your love shines throught them...

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2002-10-18 07:58 AM

Great love poem gal...here's one..
Come to me
do not hesitate
I am not funky

Please be mine
Let our hearts entwingle
Like honeysucker

Jump around me
Scuff my boots
Fingerpoke at me

Skippy toe by
With owl-growls
And Fa-la-la's

Love with me
All your grits
As I love you

[This message has been edited by Toerag (10-18-2002 08:20 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-10-18 08:19 AM

garysgirl,
this almost has heart images imprinted on it.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-10-18 08:43 AM

Ethel,
I think you did pretty darn good, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-10-18 09:02 AM

Beautiful romantic words of love here Ethel.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2002-10-18 09:04 AM

Ethel ~

I think you just did! --express your love for this seemingly wonderful man in your life----and quite well at that, I might add!

Ahhh! Love sweet love!

Linda

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-10-18 09:51 AM

(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I know just how you feel because I love my Joanna so much and I feel every time I fail to even describe an iota of the love I have for her and I wonder if she knows how much I love her! (kiss on cheek) May true love always fill your heart and may the words of destiny always sing to your soul, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

11 posted 2002-10-18 09:52 AM

Not inadequate in the least, exquisite is more the proper word. Very nicely done Ethel. Enjoyed this very much this morning.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-10-18 10:03 AM

Thanks, Pat. Did you notice that I tried to write it the way Rob was telling us in his lesson? I feel that I have a LOT farther to go to even write a wee bit the way he was speaking of. But, I DO have these enormous "FEELINGS" in my heart for my Gary and other aspects of life...so I guess that counts for something. Huh? Thanks for your encouragement. I appreciate it very much.
Lov To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2002-10-18 10:04 AM

Thanks, Scorpio. I appreciate your kind words.

Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2002-10-18 10:10 AM

Hey, Mr. Toe. Thanks much for the poem. I guess you know that you need to post that one, too, for everybody to enjoy. It's written with true Southern charm.....with grits and all!!!! More people would see that "Southern Charm" they talk about you having. Wonder how many of our "family of friends" like "grits" like we do? HaHa! I've heard that Northerners think those things are icky and make fun of them?!? Thanks for being you.
Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2002-10-18 10:13 AM

Kethry...thanks so very much from Australia this morning. I love your poems. I see heart imprints all in your poetry. You write straight from the heart, and I love that. Thank you.

Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2002-10-18 10:15 AM

Thanks Mr. Seymour. I tried really hard. See the time I made the post? Thasnks for leaving a reply to me.

Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2002-10-18 10:19 AM

Thanks, Nancy, for your reply. You are the romatic one. It shows so very much in your poetry. We can't keep it hid, can we? HaHa! (Not that we'd want too!!) Thank you.
Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

18 posted 2002-10-18 10:23 AM

Sweet Linda...thanks, dear Lady. I've got to hurry so I can read Mr. Toe's reply to your poem you wrote to him!!!HeeHee!! Thank you very much for your reply.

Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2002-10-18 10:39 AM

Dear Sweet Noah, you do very well expressing your love to your Joanna. I hope that she appreciates it. Thanks for stopping by this morning, Noah. You're so sweet.
Love To All,
Ethel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

20 posted 2002-10-18 10:46 AM

Anne, thanks much for stopping by. I love your comments, as well as your beautiful poetry. Thank you for your kind words.

Love To All,
Ethel

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