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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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It's just another.. Look away, reflect on sight of autumn, so deep of color bloom of repose. more harsh words to deflect no, ingest, digest.. Turn away, lost in thought pictures in mind now play display, for a moment of pause. I'm getting good at this as the words get louder still.. Instead, caress of time now past, gentle images of love, caring laced around the edge. I don't feel the pain anymore.. WhiteRose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose, Well done my dear, enjoyed. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What an escape! Muchly enjoyed.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Anne, I love the way you wrote this poem. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice! Love the 'caring laced' line, exquisite! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a unique and special little poem with progressive positive energy! Also enjoyed your commentary---it was as if you were reading to me! EA |
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