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Drexler_McStyles
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0 posted 2002-12-14 09:11 PM



trench work

seldom spent
are my hours of moral chastity
under the waves
of an aquarium
Lungs full of saltwater
is more my style
I find it hard to neglect
the growing list of defects
that I cultivate with such righteousness
I find it hard to find fault
in the things that brought them about
things I adore
with a venomous life-force

my body and mind
are not as strong
as the desire I have
to destroy them

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1 posted 2002-12-14 09:56 PM


OK, so maybe it's time to get outta the trenches? LOL, you always take masochism to new heights.
Enjoyed the aquarium swim.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2002-12-15 04:23 AM


dig a little deeper and i bet you'll find the strength...it usually hides well. I enjoyed this write, sort of reminds me of me
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