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Open Poetry #23

Solving Me

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-14 10:37 AM

Solving Me

I alone
had worked
on the puzzle
one piece
at a time
always missing
something
never seeing
the whole picture
leaving it unsolved

until you

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-14 10:57 AM

I just put a tiny puzzle together last night, figuritively and literally.
As always, a thought provoking write.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-14 11:00 AM

Funny how one little piece makes all the rest of the puzzle fit so perfectly....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2002-12-15 06:10 PM

Love this verse, one piece can make a difference

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

4 posted 2002-12-16 01:07 AM

You write so true that I want to form a posse and come after you. Thank you.

etoodog

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