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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-12-13 10:14 PM

I shall
kiss you silly,
until we can no longer
stand
this laughter
of mutual adoration,

we
find
so rare.

Merriment showing
in the soft lines
around your wet eyes,

shining joy.

We wander
through the woods,
the day alive

~with us~

and
butterflies
and birds and trees
and grass and leaves
and

OH!

My breath
inhales
the male of you,
grabbing my wrist
and with a twist,

I
am
on
top.

You,

grisly,
growling,

grinning once more,

pine needles aren't
soft, or a
romantic floor.

I,
race away,
flaming desire,

through
warm, steamy
greenery.
Ferns caressing
my bare legs,
and
you tackle.

We in a heap
of sighs
and eyes,

and,
of the
knowing.

.
.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-14-2002 06:47 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-12-13 10:20 PM

(smiles) Oh Patricia, this is lovely, sweet friend, I sighed all throughout this, may this romance always fill your heart with joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-13 10:36 PM

nothing quite beats a good romp in the hay,
does it, laughing the day away......sheer bliss
thanks for reminding me of one beutiful day,

quiero agradecerte
por darme el mejor dia de mi vida

" i want to thank you for giving me the best day of my life"

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2002-12-13 10:43 PM

Noah,

Thanks for replying; yes, romance is fun and joyful with the right person.

Inkedgoddess,

Thanks for replying; A romp in the pine needles and a true love, sheer bliss.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-14 03:08 AM

geez...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-12-15 02:30 AM

Very nice...James

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2002-12-15 03:26 AM

And they say ignorance is bliss, ha!
I loved this, you brought a giggle and sigh to me. Thank you! Very well written.

Keep it up

Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-12-15 03:34 AM

Pat, I loved this playful poem of love. It made me have some very good thoughts of me and my Love...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-12-15 08:23 AM

Pine needles? what pine needles?
You mean those weren't downy feathers?

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2002-12-15 10:53 AM

loved, as usual. this poem had so much movement, i felt as if i were there. you've got such a brilliant mind, with fresh ideas every time.
lots of love gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2002-12-15 11:01 AM

A very playful write...I loved the spirit of fun and adventure..

believe in what your heart feels...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

11 posted 2002-12-15 11:32 AM

Pat.....this is wonderful! A romantic playing field filled with love's laughter, so enjoyed this poem!

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

12 posted 2002-12-15 11:37 AM

this is clever the way you lead us to the path you wanted us to view, but feel as well.....good on you girl~!

*S*

~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~

~A~Tov

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

13 posted 2002-12-15 01:01 PM

Just want to say how much I enjoyed reading this.

Wistful

Ed

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2002-12-15 01:19 PM

Oh, this is so playful! I absolutely love it!

~ happy hugs from another playful kitten

Linda

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

15 posted 2002-12-15 02:14 PM

I enjoyed the youthful feel to this, as I remember those days very well. Thanks!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2002-12-15 02:28 PM

regards2you - kiss me silly, as I shall always smile...

BC

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

17 posted 2002-12-15 11:29 PM

Ahhh, I enjoyed the playful nature of this write so much!
Thank you for this treasure!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

18 posted 2002-12-15 11:50 PM

Oh how I enjoy these playful romps, Pat...
but watch out for those pine needles....
This is an adorable poem

~ loving hugs from one who always romps amongst the pine needles

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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