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Awareden -- by me, brian sites and serenity blaze
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Awareden -- by me, brian sites and serenity blaze |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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we swung down out of the trees together and looked across the plains together and started talking and walking we walked the plains of Africa and watched the sun set in our eyes writing poems with every breath we lit fires and gathered as cicada sang and shared that which had been unspoken the moon and its light on the glade left us in a nod's refrain the music is still spinning out.... gazing into fire again and morning dew wiped from the grass with dawn's legs stretching tell me blue is not just you tell me white flame is my claim tell me white flame is my claim reading the age of stones in every step, the wind in every glance let the storms of wind sculpt stone and fashion these words out of a common bond and the high falcon watches all the history unfolding, infants crawling unmask her! let her fly! the winglings fly away catch the knowing of her eye and know that she be born again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WOW! Awesome stuff, you guys! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and watched the sun set in our eyes writing poems with every breath we lit fires and gathered as cicada sang and shared that which had been unspoken the moon and its light on the glade left us in a nod's refrain the music is still spinning out.... gazing into fire again and morning dew wiped from the grass with dawn's legs stretching tell me blue is not just you tell me white flame is my claim tell me white flame is my claim reading the age of stones in every step, the wind in every glance let the storms of wind sculpt stone and fashion these words out of a common bond ============================== whoa....I need some of what you guys were having...this is so cool...the imagery, the verbiage.... writing poems with every breath what else can poets do when poets do  collaborate more please ... group inspire looks good on ya  It's so nice to wake up in the morning all alone and not have to tell somebody you love them when you don't love them any more R.Brautigan [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (12-14-2002 07:24 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Very well done! Quite the trio you make... May we see more please? ~Hugs to the three of you~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
you all A pleasure to read this colorful journey and sharing of words! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*they made it easy*  great guys |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I don't know who started this (or finished it), But, It seems a thing that needed to be done. STELLAR!! Ed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
let the storms of wind sculpt stone and fashion these words out of a common bond  BRAVO!Standing ovation! I'm swinging from the vines with this one.  |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
and morning dew wiped from the grass with dawn's legs stretching tell me blue is not just you tell me white flame is my claim tell me white flame is my claim I'd say this is a threesome worth repeating! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, everyone. We work well together. |
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