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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Even It's almost like you don't know what to do when you're with someone that doesn't want to kiss you ass anymore. I could tell you exactly what to do if you cared to even up the score. JamesLee November23 2002 |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What would you do? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I like the edge to this piece... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is such a poignant and edgy write, sweet friend, I love it, I think we all handle this approach differently, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you amusumi, scorpio and Noah... amusumi it would be something along the line of its her turn now to kiss my ass...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmm, I thought I was good at telling it like it is! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I guess you could say that this is "in-your-face" writing--or maybe it would be more aptly described as, my-ass-in-your-face writing! tehe ~ May you find peace and fulfillment in your life EA |
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