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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-13 10:40 PM

The fragile strings of hope that bind me here
Threaten to unravel, the corpus of my fears
My thoughts are blades that bleed me every time
the words upon this blue, imbued with my decline
For secrets never meant that much to me
I'd rather sink, a stone, then swim in veiled seas

Forgive if I disturb this deep blue calm
with words like driven nails through open palms
I sacrifice these thoughts on slates of white
an offering and purge, to help me sleep at night
Seclusion's never really suited me
I'd rather wear my soul, then hide it under sleeve...

********For all who bare their thoughts on PIP and bestow us with the greatest gift of all, their very souls.********

Raph

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-14-2002 12:06 AM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2002-12-13 10:46 PM

This is very honorable, enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-13 10:50 PM

very eloquent,
its hard to keep it under wraps i know from where you speak,
but also hard to be looked upon in this cyberfishbowl at times,
feeling a conflict of wanting to be seen/but wanting to hide too.......
if you understand this, i salute you

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-13 11:22 PM

Pat thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it

Inked I do understand what you're saying and I thank you for understanding where I'm coming from, you got it perfectly

raph

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2002-12-13 11:46 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts, Raph, and courage to be yourself and truthful.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2002-12-14 01:22 AM

Likewise Mark "May the force be with you"

raph

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2002-12-14 01:33 AM

You already know what I think, I think.
I am delighted you've chosen to be an active member here.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2002-12-14 01:44 AM

Thanks Midnite I think you know what I think about you. I think lol
raph

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

8 posted 2002-12-14 01:46 AM

Please reveal all. I nodded in agreement during the read. Enjoyed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-12-14 01:55 AM

I'd rather sink, a stone, then swim in veiled seas

I for one take no offense whatsoever,
I feel almost human now!!!

Thank you for this~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2002-12-14 02:14 AM

RS Thank you very much for your words, I'm glad you enjoyed it and feel the same way about poetry.

Thank you Blues for taking the time to read and write in.

raph

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