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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-12-12 12:36 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#109"

Copyright 2002 by:  MARK V SHELDON


my break

a wait
whittling
into someday

just don't make me
your tap-root


"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-12 12:56 PM


interesting contrast here in thought..at least the way I read it...

the joy of these is the many ways people can read them and what they take from them... each to their own experience..


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2 posted 2002-12-12 01:09 PM


Paused notes

suspended

awaiting
release
of the

base.

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2002-12-12 06:17 PM


Like life, Ron...  one big Rorchach.  I'm still trying to decide which is more comfortable, though -- the arm chair or the couch...

Kacy...  release of the base...?

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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4 posted 2002-12-13 10:56 AM


Bass, the bass, not the base.
Typos are so bizarre. Glad I rarely indulge in such baseness, which leaves one scratching his head wondering. LOL, sorry Mark. I meant the bass notes.


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5 posted 2002-12-14 01:37 AM


Consider yourself liberated from the depths of misplaced poems.
Bass, not base notes.
And the foundation of your thoughts is rock solid.

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6 posted 2002-12-14 01:48 AM


the arm chair or the couch...

How about curled up in a fetal position on the floor?


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7 posted 2002-12-14 01:59 AM




This is the first of yours which caused me to laugh.

It was the just don't make me your tap-root....smiling here.....

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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