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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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birds disperse on the sky, spin these imprisoning thoughts of helplessness, into pretty pictures above, this momentary diversion erasing fast, as i sink between fairytale illusion and cold stark obligation, grasping for comfort while i sit on the fence, and wait for time to pass by |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Fence sitting can give you a bad case of splinters.... nice imagery here.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Loving it inked, grit and heart few people have raph |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cpat, splinters can be fun, depending on who is helping to take them off your butt..... aenimal.......you are very,very perceptive |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) well I guess you are correct...it is all a matter of perspective... and view |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
Into pretty pictures above. I like it. I'll bet there is a bird feeder in the tree by the fence.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice imagery |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
LIked the landscape of this. TD |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Outstanding Inky A worthy read no matter where you sit. Ed |
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