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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-12-13 08:00 PM



Secretly I've watched hands.
Hands hold pens in signatured rest.
Fingers hooked through Missing U espresso mugs.
My longing ever present, ever aching.
But alas, the oblique path I travel,
never brings me to you.
So I refrain my eyes to linger on hands.
Hands that gently touched me at end of games rest.
Fingertips that hang coats and hats.
These things occur while you ponder
misty mornings full of fog in abandonned townships,
while vacant street lights blink their commands.
Yet I feel blessed to be a mind's voyeur
upon the naked images you portray,
or sneak a glance to a purposeful head
facing the music of symphony's play.
Oh what would you say...if you truly knew.
If I could be all that I am,
yet have lost along the way.
Would I be enough...
Or the humour of the play?
I know the limitations
And stay my unwelcome hands.
Fixating on those that taper to mystery
Of places I shall never behold.
Hands that smooth a crown of skin.
Fingertips touching structured cheek.
For meeting those eyes would undo the soul.
Secretly I've watched hands.


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1 posted 2002-12-13 08:03 PM




(sigh) Oh Katrina, this is so beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, I could feel some yearning in your words and wish for the best comfort and love to always shine in you! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katrina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-12-14 02:48 AM


wow, what a picture! I enjoyed this, made me think.
Diane Coway
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since 2002-08-01
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3 posted 2002-12-15 01:03 AM


I enjoyed your write very much.  Now I may notice hands more.
Coway

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