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A Tone of Voice
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0 posted 2002-12-14 12:37 PM


The wise women brought spells to the waves, hoping To cast dreams upon the clearness of blue waters
Precious stones pressed to their breast were Delicately tied with ribbons tinted by seasons and The mysteries of life
The fragrances drifted sweet
As others with innocent eyes
Stood richly on fertile soil
Blanketed in their relevance of ritual
They wept as the voices sang
Grant us knowledge, grant us peace
Ancient Heavenly Father,
Deliver us from the travesty
Of more than we need



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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2002-12-14 03:40 PM


Delicately tied with ribbons tinted by seasons and The mysteries of life

You're a woman with much wisdom ATOV!
Enjoyed your poem very much.

Happy belated Birthday wishes to you too.

A Tone of Voice
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2 posted 2002-12-14 03:48 PM


Thank you BlueSerenade, I goofed on posting  the poem....*S*  Also thank you for the birthday wishes~!
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2002-12-14 06:39 PM


yes wisdom here... and it is delicate in presentation..

I enjoyed

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2002-12-14 07:52 PM


I must say, that I, most assuredly, appreciate your "Tone Of Voice". It resonates with my inner one...

~ May you flow gently with the tides of time

Earth Angel

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5 posted 2002-12-14 11:58 PM


CPat Hair and Earth Angel....I am pleased that my words said something to you, thank you for reading and responding~! *S*

~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~

~A~Tov

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