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He speaks through your lips
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He speaks through your lips |
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haydenjames Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 164Antigua & Barbuda 
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Like the echo of a distant truth, So I decipher the words like coals From your lips. It’s a truth that You somehow veil even from yourself. Yet, like the heat of the sun evaporates Cloudy skies, so I’ve penetrated Your tampered thoughts. I’m in you head like a cold and for me there is no remedy. You look me in the eyes And begin talking drivel. As He speaks through your lips, Screws up your thoughts, Rewires your conscience to self benefit mode And turns you against the trustworthy. My poetry is at: http://www.thehayden.org |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You look me in the eyes And begin talking drivel. As He speaks through your lips, Screws up your thoughts, Rewires your conscience to self benefit mode And turns you against the trustworthy. Very interesting. This poem sure is layered. I'm still exploring all of them. A nice write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I’m in you(r) head like a cold and for me there is no remedy." Dang. No wonder I can't shake that cold headache. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You made the reader do some thinking in this one, and that's a good thing to do. Thank you.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
haydenjames Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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