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Open Poetry #23

Effigy

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-12 11:26 PM

Strip the skin
tiny red ribbons
fall to the floor
Sewn back together
an effigy
I burn everyday

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2002-12-12 11:34 PM

imagery is powerful... good writing

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-12 11:56 PM

Thank you very much wayout, very kind of you to say. take care

raph

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-12-13 01:09 AM

You cut me to the bone with this one.
BTW, I know how to sew if you need help.

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2002-12-13 02:29 AM

Duct tape can't mend a broken heart.

paladin

....a knight without armor

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2002-12-13 04:51 AM

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2002-12-13 03:37 PM

Thanks Midnite you get the needle ready

No Paladin but it has so many other uses!

Sorry passing didn't mean to do that. Smile

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