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Another Void |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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And so I woke to an empty place in my heart, my life meaningless at the moment. I have vented until depleted and any more is pointless. I need to exercise this burden that weighs me down and feed myself... but with what? I am so hungry but nothing tempts my appetite and so I vacate my feelings holding onto nothing once more. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nothing from nothing leave nothing got to have something if you wanta be free... OK so I changes the words a bit... hugs to you... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, There is always something, have a happy holiday. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Sy, and you too.. and for you C... a nice  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
The nothing and I are old friends. A write that I can feel M. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
excellent description of that dark place--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, you're good at this free verse...I can't get it down I guess, and am amazed at those who can. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Maureen, I feel for you, try to find love, it is out there as tomorrow. Allow youself to have a wonderful Christmas and New Year. At times smile with yourself. Be well: As I woke unto an empty place Where drought had been so long I found the smallest, smallest trace Where love did once belong Between the tears I found a smile Of which I thought had gone Beneath the dirt of drought and mile I found a heart still strong With many tears of carried Near a river came to flow And as it runs it washes And the debris seems to go The hunger I’ve been feeling Now is tempted by the green The mind that now is healing Is forgetting what has been Tomorrow, yes tomorrow Please tomorrow to me come To leave behind the sorrow And share again some fun Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WhiteRose, well then we both have the same friend Sandpiper, thankyou Dixie, I just start writing and whatever comes out, comes out..sometimes it rhymes when I dont feel like rhyming and the opposite for free verse. I have a lot of inspiration, from friends and events in my life. *s Rick, it's best to not try and find love, but to let it find you. Thank you for this lovely poem . "Tomorrow, yes tomorrow Please tomorrow to me come To leave behind the sorrow And share again some fun" I will try... M |
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