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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2002-12-15 01:31 PM

Underneath a vacant sky
I sow these fruitless
ideals in tainted soil
and reap only dust

Barren fields that
sprawl across the
plains of thought
for miles without end

The line of horizon
fades into the sky
engulfing me in
a cold sea of grey

I am emaciated
the pangs of hunger
scream for new gods
to feed my soul

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2002-12-15 01:37 PM

You wrote of the vacant skies, only too well!---as if you were writing from personal experience. If this be the case, I am sending over a downy soft comforter and words of comfort to feed your soul and lots of candles to add light to this dreary picture you painted with your pen.

You certainly did create an atmosphere, albeit cold and lonely!

~ Sending you lots of love, light, and emotional healing

Linda

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-15 02:01 PM

Thank you very much Linda, very sweet gestures which I accept gratefully.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-15 03:04 PM

Raph, this does sound awfully lonely. I hope it's not from your own personal feelings right now.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2002-12-15 03:16 PM

no comment Ethel thanks for the support

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2002-12-15 06:17 PM

if you are hungry, let someone feed you...
my mail is open too

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-12-15 08:29 PM

enjoy

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2002-12-15 08:31 PM

thanks inked be wary I'll take you up on that offer

thanks vandana appreciate it

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-15-2002 08:32 PM).]

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2002-12-15 08:52 PM

Aenimal,

This is an interesting poem and thought provoking.

God bless,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2002-12-15 09:28 PM

OK Raph, time to flush the soils, remove all the toxic wastes, and plant some new seeds for the upcoming year.

Wanna homemade cookie?

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2002-12-15 09:54 PM

Thanks regards appreciate the kind words

Kacy I never pass on a homemade cookie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2002-12-16 02:59 AM

I think I've been there too

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2002-12-16 09:10 PM

Well if you've found a way out I'm all ears

raph

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

13 posted 2003-03-07 09:23 PM

I'm bringing this one back, nice write as always.Powerful.
Jason

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