Your worst nightmare: part one (More to come)

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Open Poetry #23

Your worst nightmare: part one (More to come)

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

0 posted 2002-10-16 06:20 PM

The vision of the preditor,
With his sleek coat,
Shining like the sun on morning dew.
And bones that poke through his hair
Skin like overstreatched plastic, thin with hunger.

Bending down,
ready to pounce.
Any moment now.

Time stands still.
Life flashes before my eyes.
My life.

Fangs that drip with drool, maybe venom.
Hungry orange eyes
Burning with fury.
At me.

what did I do
To anger the beast.

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-16-2002 06:22 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-16 07:08 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is perfect for Halloween, I love it, this is hideously delightful, yay, this got me on the edge of my seat, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

2 posted 2003-03-09 10:09 AM

Wind... I am deeply impressed by your poetry!!! I don't have much time lately to read poetry on PIP, I try to make time for the messages and discussion boards... this way I found out about you and you made my day with your talent and also with your personality!

Only 13 you said??? Wow!!!

Neeraja

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