Open Poetry #23 |
Candy |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm sorry if my words leave a foul taste upon your tongue The candied words you seek are far too sweet to fall from this embittered pen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If one feels embittered by the actions of another, sweet candy words would not ring true. It is best to speak honestly even if it leaves a bad taste in the other person's mouth. ~ Hoping that the candy words will soon spill from your mouth, because they are in your heart! Linda |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Truth is always the greatest kindness. Merry X |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Raph, truth IS always better to say (or write). If it's not "real", the hearer (or reader) can usually tell, don't you think? Though some of the writers here still sometimes fool me.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks for the comments but the poems been slightly misinterpreted, I won't offer my own interpretation. I'll just leave you all to yours. Thank you for responding Linda, amusemi, and Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
what then, seems so simple the interpretation one would think.... is it that youre saying in genreal, you cant always play to an audience and give them sweetness and sugar if thats what they want,,,,,,,,,in your poetry otherwise, you got me too.......no comprendo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal All is temporary, enjoyed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Aenimal, It has taken me awhile to realize some people do write exclusively for this board. I've always written ......(far past) for whomever, (layman, non-poet) who don't necessarily look for 'type', but often say, "It seems you wrote this just for me." I KNOW I've offended some here and I also KNOW that same poem was an affirmation for anothers. Also don't know if you are specifically referencing this site-these poets, but I just found even more forums, here, on which to post. Some of mine should have been posted in a different forum, (most recent: "I, The Lumberjack") I think, but if they are too far off base a moderator would notify. I personally like a variety, emotional, as well as other themes. Any kind of emotional works for me, and I find it interesting to view others perspectives and heartfelt anything negative or positive.... I also think your poem may have nothing to do with fellow poets. Thanks, Hugs and regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks inked, seymour and regards2you for your nice comments and deep insights raph [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-15-2002 08:28 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep, I know what you mean! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh do you passing? Cause I don't remember what i meant by it anymore |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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