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Aenimal
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0 posted 2002-12-11 01:29 AM


A cherub spreads her wings before
a backdrop of flickering lights
whose glow, try as they might
cannot compete with her smile
A velvet dress with ribbons and bows
Dangling curls and eyes of brown
that sparkle wide with wonder
as she laughs her laugh with me
The music of angels

For my little cousin,
whose smile melts away the vulgar world and restores it to it's original pristine beauty
raph

© Copyright 2002 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-11 01:35 AM


What a great gift to Veronica!
I love that perfect explanatory ending.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-12-11 01:52 AM


Thanks Midnite I hopes she likes as much as her countless Barbies lol

raph

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3 posted 2002-12-11 06:46 AM


very sweet,
if only we could just freeze them in time,
mine was a doll, till she hit the preteens, turned into a*****, now is coming full circle again, most days.
anyhow, let her mommy and daddy know how u feel

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4 posted 2002-12-11 08:29 AM


nothing like a childs smile and innocence to not only disarm us, but remind us how we over complicate life sometimes..

I enjoyed

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5 posted 2002-12-11 08:32 AM


AAWW, this is cute, Raph. I know your little cousin will love it, too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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6 posted 2002-12-11 01:59 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! This brought a tear to my eye because it is soooooooo beautiful and I love angel sos much and just like you, your cousin is a true angel that will always be blessed to have your smile at heart! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphaela, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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7 posted 2002-12-11 04:07 PM


Inkedgoddess they I think we all become a******* once we hit our teens, its called becoming an adult. lol

Cpat, exactly what i feel every time she's around

Thanks Ethel hope she can understand it

Noah thanks but I can't say I've ever let a guy kiss me on the cheek, how about a firm handshake  

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-11-2002 04:07 PM).]

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-03-24 06:59 AM


Hey Raph - this is just beautiful - just saw it and had to reply - *wink* reminds me of how Billy makes me feel - such a lovely tribute to someone who lights your soul - have you given this to her?  xxoo
littlewing
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9 posted 2003-03-24 08:32 AM


ok i tried to bring this one up . . .
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