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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-11-11 11:40 AM



~*~

With left hand held high
Right one laid across the chest
~ Allegiance is pledged

~*~


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-11-2002 12:00 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-11-11 12:14 PM



How appropriate that today
we remember just how it should
be done!

Thank you for this, my dear!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-11-11 12:18 PM


Very very nicely done Linda!
And as Karilea just said..
very appropriate for today.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
  It whispers so listen closely~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-11 01:06 PM


Linda, how powerful are your words!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-11-11 01:52 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too salute with you these wonderful men who secure our freedom and the colors for which they're worth, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-11 02:09 PM


enjoyed it a lot!

Charisma

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6 posted 2002-11-11 03:02 PM


Well done.
Sandra

scorpio
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7 posted 2002-11-11 03:07 PM


succinctly expressed...well done, Linda.

...believe what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2002-11-11 03:11 PM


Mine too!  Respectfully done neighbour.

                
Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2002-11-11 04:46 PM


BRAVO!   Thank you kind lady; you honor our nation's bravest and best.

Huggles, 'M'

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10 posted 2002-11-11 05:34 PM


You've said so much in so few words... do you think you could give me a lesson or two (or five thousand *G*) on succinctness? *G*

This is excellent, EA!

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11 posted 2002-11-11 05:36 PM


Raise your voice and sing
a psalm for fallen soldiers,
and praise bravery.

We need to remember these things.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-11-12 08:53 AM


Sunshine  ~  Thank you VERY much dear rays of sun!
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Enchantress  ~  I appreciate your kind reply!
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Ethel  ~  Tha't what I was trying to convery! The power of the pledge of allegiance and of those who have put their life on the line for our nations!
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Noah  ~  Let's all stand united!
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Charisma  ~  I'm pleased that you enjoyed!
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Sandra  ~  Thank you!
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Scorpio  ~  The "succinctly" has been a stretch (or should I say "shrink" tehe) for me but I do enjoy writing them. Thank you!
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Mysteria  ~  Why thank you, sister Canadian!
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Marti ~ "BRAVO"!---well, I feel I must curtsy for that one! Thanx 'M'!
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Suthern  ~  Don't change! I like the way you write!--fun, flowery, full, funny, factual, fantastic and fantazmagorical!
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Pilgrimage ~ Whoa! Wonderful patriotic senryu!
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~ Blessings to you all and to those who fight, and to those who have fought, for our nations!

Earth Angel


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13 posted 2003-05-01 12:52 PM



Do not let your hand
rest by your side, submissive...
let your pride shine on

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