| Open Poetry #23 |
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I Am ( 20 or less) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines
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fresh from a cleansing warmed by thoughts touching me, washing away the pain "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I really liked this. If the human bean syndrome were not contagious, I might have something intelligent to say. I'll try later. ![]() Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
I love it. Sounds really good and your so good with your words. Keep them comin!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I try to convince people I'm 20 or less too....oh, you meant words...either way, enjoyed the write gal... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Keilo and quik thanks, and you Toerag don't look a day over 20 ![]() *(someone said that exact thing to me or was it they said I was way over 20... can't quite remember) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HAHA, that Toe stole my intended reply! Enjoyed this brief refreshing imagery. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
many avenues of thought to explore in the underlying mood and emotion....good work! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
mmm...nice! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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