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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-12-10 01:21 PM



fresh from a cleansing
warmed by thoughts
touching me, washing away
the pain

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Kielo
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since 2002-02-11
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1 posted 2002-12-10 01:47 PM


I really liked this. If the human bean syndrome were not contagious, I might have something intelligent to say. I'll try later.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

quik
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since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia
2 posted 2002-12-10 01:49 PM


I love it. Sounds really good and your so good with your words. Keep them comin!!!
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2002-12-10 02:40 PM


I try to convince people I'm 20 or less too....oh, you meant words...either way, enjoyed the write gal...
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-12-10 02:52 PM


Keilo and quik thanks,

and you Toerag don't look a day over 20

*(someone said that exact thing to me or was it they said I was way over 20... can't quite remember)

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2002-12-10 03:23 PM


HAHA, that Toe stole my intended reply!
Enjoyed this brief refreshing imagery.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2002-12-10 03:37 PM


many avenues of thought to explore in the underlying mood and emotion....good work!
Pilgrimage
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7 posted 2002-12-10 04:16 PM


mmm...nice!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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