Open Poetry #23 |
Clearly A Notch Above |
regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
For goodness sake, don't feel embarrassed or humiliated by what others think. Remember, The only reason they don't take chances is, they don't have your kind of ~courage~! . . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Pat, what wise words you do say... Like your style, friend... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes!! How very true!! Pat, this a welcomed addition to my library... believe in what your heart feels... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Midnitesun, Though cannot view that image well on my screen, I am assuming it has a happy face. Thanks! Ethel, Thanks for your words. I wrote this a very, very long time ago, when making career changes, trying to make ends meet, and find housing, and keep kids going in right direction, and so many other changes I often felt more critisized than supported. So I wrote myself this poem. And, believed it. Now, I find with trying to write poetry, in different forms and from different perspectives, some of the lines I view on-line of my new efforts tend to cause me feelings of embarrassment....from an extremely ~uncouth~word/line to other poor choices; but, I seem to need to see it on-line to know it...an ouch I am trying to accept in order to become a better writer.. Seymour, thanks for the hats off. Scorpio, Thanks for taking the time to read and library? How nice. Thanking all of you for your time and thoughts. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good confidence builder.....nice writing! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...that's me..."Just a notch above insane"....great write gal |
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