Solid Ground and Intangible Shadows

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Open Poetry #23

Solid Ground and Intangible Shadows

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-10-17 07:14 AM

Solid ground
Where tired feet pound
Across which I walk silent
No mutterings are casually spent
As I’m walking through shadow after shadow
Consumed by sorrow upon sorrow
Wishing to fall deeply in
And there my time spend
In the ground.

Gloom
A response to serenity blaze’s Poem “Quicksand”

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2002-10-17 09:33 AM

a very interesting write

M

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-10-17 09:50 AM

Ah..morning gloom. Nicely done gloomy.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-03 04:34 AM

I know

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2004-06-06 02:11 PM

Love the title...and the shifting feel of the words you used.

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