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Taken By Storm
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Taken By Storm |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Shivering anticipation, wanting you, pushing you away. Pre-birth, You seeped my soul weeped my psyche, in pattern of shade pulled, blowing to and fro. Like an itchy cavity, to sneeze a breeze and peek into my existence. My window screen denies fangs, outside, whose bite, a delight, favorite morsal: This Little Girl. I slam ~pain~ shut, retreat and make believe, ~tear-streaked~ I don't see you are my power. And, the hurt I've denied for an eternity. But, now I'll quiet this storm accepting the seemingly impossible. Honoring you as you pen my senses yet unexplored, for you are my muse I so adore! . A note of explanation: went decades without writing...until recently . ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (12-07-2002 03:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Patricia, this is so lovely, sweet friend, your golden heart always shines with such a muse and even as you may not write for years your inspiration is endless to us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Please note I edited this poem, doubling up most sentences, however the edit doesn't show and by hitting print, can see it isn't aligned properly but cannot get it to come up on screen to see it. So, sorry....it might look a mess until I can get it on screen which sometimes takes hours... Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
regards2you - however long it's been you haven't lost your touch... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
regards2you, the poem reflects the poet and - it is well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Hello Regards. I like this... guess why? Sunkissed. [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (12-07-2002 06:25 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Noah, How sweet you are...it is you who are an inspiration to all of us. Thank for your kind words. Bill, Thank you so much for replying..... I know this is a bit much, with the fangs bit, but really, I stuffed down feelings about writing, (and not able to persue it) it became like a wild animal, the times I couldn't ignore it. Always stalking the inner me.... This is just an experiment of writing. Thank you. Kethry, That the poem reflects the poet is something I shall think about a while Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. Sunkissed, "I like this, guess why?" Not a clue. Thanks for responding... ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
better late than never...and thank you |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
So glad the prodigal muse returned--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I miss reading you. x |
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