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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2002-12-10 05:58 AM


just a little unedited...off the top of my head..


~My Scars~

just scars
perfect little lines
carved by a razors edge
i know you see them
go ahead and ask
but have a little tact
you know what "those marks" are
i try to hide my scars
but the pain shows itself
and the scars never fade
maybe they will someday
maybe ill be normal
and you wont look at me that way
tell me though
whats normal anyway?

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2002 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 323
the winds of destiny
1 posted 2002-12-10 06:20 AM


A very poignant and expressive poem. It leaves much in the readers eyes to ponder.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2002-12-10 06:49 AM


When you get past the pain
the scars remain. *HuGS*
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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