Open Poetry #23 |
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Problems |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
You know how things become so complicated And for some unknown reason you can’t get out You become so devastated That you try to take different route No matter what, it stays right there with you And there is no use to hide It something you have go through With your feelings that you hold inside Your mind becomes so bare, so empty That you lose so much control You take your time and say to your self” I didn’t know I had it in me” Where now things begin to unfold Now problems become so tense And there’s nothing you can do Things start to make no sense But what else can you do Problems become larger and more strenuous And you’re wondering why Everything seems so continuos These problems make you cry Its start to get out your reach of control There’s no stopping it now But being so bold Makes you turn out fowl Everything you’ve tried, nothing seems to work But you keep trying anyways People treat you like dirt That’s why you have problems nowadays But always having your head up high Will take you very far Knowing what you know, and believing peoples lies That’s why you are the way you are Not listening to what others think of you Maybe will set your problems free Just tell them I don’t want anything to do with you And now you can open your eyes and see |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know how that is |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
just be positive and go for positive company and places ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Greetings: This is the first of your work I have read. Intense...raw and honest. Keep honing your gifts...for we must all become what we seek in this world. All good thoughts...ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
That's it, Antonio....get your feelings out...... don't keep them bottled up inside. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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