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quik
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since 2002-11-27
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Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-09 02:04 PM



You know how things become so complicated
And for some unknown reason you can’t get out
You become so devastated
That you try to take different route
No matter what, it stays right there with you
And there is no use to hide
It something you have go through
With your feelings that you hold inside
Your mind becomes so bare, so empty
That you lose so much control
You take your time and say to your self” I didn’t know I had it in me”
Where now things begin to unfold
Now problems become so tense
And there’s nothing you can do
Things start to make no sense
But what else can you do
Problems become larger and more strenuous
And you’re wondering why
Everything seems so continuos
These problems make you cry
Its start to get out your reach of control
There’s no stopping it now
But being so bold
Makes you turn out fowl
Everything you’ve tried, nothing seems to work
But you keep trying anyways
People treat you like dirt
That’s why you have problems nowadays
But always having your head up high
Will take you very far
Knowing what you know, and believing peoples lies
That’s why you are the way you are
Not listening to what others think of you
Maybe will set your problems free
Just tell them I don’t want anything to do with you
And now you can open your eyes and see


© Copyright 2002 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-12-09 02:41 PM


yeah, I know how that is
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
2 posted 2002-12-10 12:02 PM


just be positive and go for positive company and places


ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2002-12-10 11:57 AM


Greetings:
This is the first of your work I have read.
Intense...raw and honest.

Keep honing your gifts...for we must all become what we seek in this world.  
All good thoughts...ThisDiamond

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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4 posted 2002-12-10 12:09 PM


That's it, Antonio....get your feelings out......
don't keep them bottled up inside.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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