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Retaliation |
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Computer Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10Norfolk, NE |
I'll not be satisfied until hewn limbs bejewel the field, This won't be rectified until the mausoleum's sealed! I'll hack and slash and stab until the skeleton's revealed, They'll beg and kick and grab and pray that my assault will yield! They'll have no knowledge of my name -- with countenance concealed, I'll point my blade above and sneer, "Your god withdrew his shield!" The massacre will end before the warning bell is pealed, My foes cannot defend against the power that I wield! The enemy must pay because my wounds remain unhealed, This is their final day; the sentence cannot be repealed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Computer And that is how the pudding jelled congealed, enjoyed. |
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Computer Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10Norfolk, NE |
Thanks for the reply! On EVERY poetry forum (except this one) rhyming verse is despised for some reason. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning Comp...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! You made your debut with an incredibly powerful write! I for one, am very fond of rhyme---I believe it started when I was a child!--I enjoyed the Nursery variety! lol P.S. Remind me to never get on your bad side! tehe! Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love rhyme and believe it should be accepted as it is a beauty of the word, to make music, to make art, to make magic! This is powerful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-08-2002 01:22 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Makes no sense this modern arrogance regarding rhyme considering it's the origin of poetry. Your rhyme is welcome here. And this had a bloody well good flow. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY Where all forms of poetry are welcome. This is really a good place to be, because everyone and their poetry is welcome. I hope you like it here. Rhyme is the kind of poetry I like best, personally. But, I like every form that I've read here. I guess because everyone here writes from their hearts. BTW, I enjoyed reading your first post, and hope to read more. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I read this one outloud and enjoyed it 100%. Welcome, new rhymemaster. LOL at your nom de plume. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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