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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
i made it to a castle once travelled through hell to get there the world outside was ugly but once i got there everything changed the sky turned blue it rained softly grass grew but such things dont last banished from the castle i crwal on the other side hopeing there is another to take me in from this my world "Cogito ergo sum"-I think, therefore I exist |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
interesting. i read this as a "no place like home" deal... and really like that interpretation. you may have meant it from the literal vp, but it hit me from that one... perhaps i'll find a castle someday myself. peace, Christopher |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sometimes it is better to build your own castles, then no one can evict you. Like this. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Sounds like life in general. A very "real" peice. Nice write. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a really good poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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