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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-12-08 01:40 AM


In the magic of a child’s Christmas eyes
So full of awe with such innocence
That their emotion cast spells
Into the deepest part of your heart

In a glee that only youth can duplicate
The energy to run down any adult
Who finally gets everything under the tree
To be awoken from asleep to awaiting eyes
Saying time a wasting

Soaring paper wrapping
In towering mounds
Of Christmas sounds
Torn to threads in split seconds
Each gift being totally devoured
In record timing

And when your bundle of joy
Finally come over to thank you
Hug your child
And savor the moment
For this is the ultimate dessert
Of the magical season

So as the day passes
Take the time to give thanks
As family being so fortunate
With the peace of having been blessed
With so many special moments

D.Lester Young 12/7/2002
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-12-08 02:23 AM


Sir, this is a very beautiful Christmas poem, with lots of truths in it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Happy Holidays to you, too.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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2 posted 2002-12-08 03:10 AM


Soaring paper wrapping
In towering mounds
Of Christmas sounds
Torn to threads in split seconds
Each gift being totally devoured
In record timing


aww I just love this sound on Christmas Morn, er dawn hehe almost.

This really touched me, thank you.

Maree


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-12-09 01:45 AM


Yes! We were all young once....ripping it apart!! And I was certain reindeers really knew how to fly!

Enjoyed the memories~  


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