Open Poetry #23 |
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The Temple Of The Blank Page |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space ![]() |
Upon an altar of gleaming white I lay my offerings Pouring words in libation to this virgin deity But Gods and muses will not be appeased this day I am humbled |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That white temple has humbled me many times....how well I can relate. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Aenimal~ OH...I'm liking this very much. Well said, my friend. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you for you're words Balladeer, it's humbled many of us i'm sure. Thank you kindly for your reply Vicky I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, this is very good. I like the way you write. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
been there--just hate when that happens--wonderful title and musings! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet Raphael, this is such a beautiful poem shining with such love and faith! (sigh) I love the muse you always cherish dear, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aenimal Enjoyed the truth here mixed with a bit of a smile. The Blank Document is a scary thing sometimes. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Raph... when the ink stops, the music flows (and vice versa...) -- maybe, write a song? (At the moment, poetry's commanding my attention...). -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you kindly Ethel ![]() Thank you sandpiper it happens to us all Thanks Noah may the muses always shine upon you Martie the Blank document haunted me for a seven year stretch with the help of PIP I'm trying to gain them back Mark thanks for the advice, currently its poetry that commands my attention as well. Baby steps. First poetry and then maybe back to painting.. |
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Ice_Queen Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 29Delaware, USA |
I liked the mythological context here. I might steal the theme for a short story, actually..j/k. Did you used to post at moontown.cafe? Groovy Oovy |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
No Ice or Jess (if you don't mind)never posted before, actually to be honest never wrote before. I found this place two weeks ago and have written all but 2 of the poems withing those weeks. Before that i hadn't really written in about 7 years. raph |
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