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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-12-07 11:13 PM

So softly to billow the night sky
Lit lowly in colors of moon shy
In the vapors still warm, linger on through the morn
…Linger here in the calm of the winter chill worn

So softly to layer in full view
Lit by flame and by ember attuned to
Full beneath and above, as the first breath of love
…Linger here in my eyes as white feathers above

With spirit as air and the heart held high
The simplest of intoxicate in vapors to sigh
In calm to surround, from the storms left unbound
…Linger here in the clear of the night sky as found

Copyright Kkh 12/07/02

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-12-07 11:24 PM

What a soft lingering feeling of longing in this.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-12-08 03:39 AM

Kathleen, so beautiful, it needs a bump..to linger longer
on this front page....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-12-08 09:47 AM

Ah, good...shivers...lovely!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-12-08 10:12 AM

ThisDiamond
This went down like a lick of ice cream,
enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-12-08 10:14 AM

Deliciously smooth and intoxicating!

EA

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-12-08 10:38 AM

As always....your picture in words sets the
mood of the poem.... Nicely done K.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-12-08 11:03 AM

love the moon, and love how you covered it.

M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-12-08 11:09 AM

ThisDiamond~
Got moon in the title ... it's got me !

And this ....

'Full beneath and above, as the first breath of love
…Linger here in my eyes as white feathers above'

.... is GORGEOUS~
It's as though you saw last night's crescent of moon through my eyes~
Thanks for a beautiful read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2002-12-08 11:56 AM

Thanks so much you guys. I know you all like to be mooned once in awhile.
Smiles from ThisDiamond

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

10 posted 2002-12-10 04:49 AM

I've never been mooned quite so beautifully

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2002-12-10 07:24 AM

This is so beautiful.

quik
Member

since 2002-11-27

Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

12 posted 2002-12-10 01:46 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

13 posted 2002-12-10 02:42 PM

Nice way to moon someone...good write

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2002-12-10 08:05 PM

ThisDiamond - m'mmm, nice... One more time...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

15 posted 2002-12-10 08:12 PM

Ahhh, the crescent moon over New England was as lovely and dreamy as your words.

I enjoyed this so much.

Hugs and Happy Holidays, Marti

'A witty saying proves nothing.'
Voltaire (1694-1778)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

16 posted 2002-12-10 08:27 PM

ThisDiamond

This is a song...I heard the melody of it in the rhythm as I read...just beautiful!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

17 posted 2002-12-11 02:37 PM

(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the moon so much and wish for its light to always shine your way with pure magic! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

18 posted 2002-12-11 04:45 PM

Oh Kathleen...I thought I had signed this!
Lovely....exceptional work!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

19 posted 2002-12-11 04:59 PM

nice

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

20 posted 2002-12-11 05:41 PM

Beautiful poem, Diamond.

Sunkissed.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

21 posted 2002-12-13 09:41 AM

Simply exquisite.

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