Open Poetry #23 |
leaves |
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A cluster of leaves claw from the edge of addict’s branch, thin twigged, with infantile hooks that latch deeply to the milken veil of both breast and sky, in flux. Synthetic shades of evergreen, draining intravenously by touch; its prints soil cloud and linen soaked in first blood then ink. First blood and then ink, rustles the leaves, brittle like knives the spine snaps by whim falling in through Venus on to the thickets and death. --------------------------- for those wondering where i disappeared to, i have got a full time job so my time on line has become very limited, also my muse been missing until Martie helped me to find it. THanks again Martie I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Hey Brian.. nice to see you back.. some sharp images in this and while it defies an easy understanding ( at least for me) if one looks and thinks it flows quite well into several... I enjoyed! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
WElcome back. Good luck with new job. Keep up this good work...sharp as steel the mind that wrote this. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank Goodness for Martie's tenacity. Keep the job, but don't forget to feed the muse. Good work, Brian...I've missed you, but in time, all poets come home... because we keep the light on! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
brian, Good your back, enjoyed the read. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian You use such sharp images to contrast inner and outer feeling. There is agony of loss in this painful write. I'm so glad your muse is back, and that I could play some small part in finding her. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
fall done fell, eh? thanks martie - i always miss Brian's words when he's not around. i like this Bri - especially the use of "claw" at the beginning. it gripped me (no pun intended) and spun me through the rest of this darkly imaged piece. C |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A cluster of leaves claw from the edge of addict's branch, thin twigged, with infantile hooks that latch deeply to the milken veil of both breast and sky, in flux. ========================== very unique imagery and personification going on here...vivid, layered, contrasts and analogies. Classic DEEP Bri-guy poetry. Was wondering where you wandered off too... good to read you and see your smiling face my poetic prophet pal It's so nice |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sharp images could not be a true statement and that you and your muse are back is great! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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