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Seasons Greetings |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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When the wind is a chilling and the gold sparks are spilling up the chimney's remember of some days long ago Then the frost is a calling with the hint of snow falling for the start of December sets the season aglow Then the stars set a twinkling in the night sky they're winking as they glisten and glitter to light up the night For the goodwill of season both the promise and reason are matched by the weather and arrayed in plain sight Now with sleigh bells a ringing and those carollers singing may the glow of the season be captured in song With the chill air a coming cross the world - there is sunning 'tis the season of pleasin' and we cannot go wrong May the world cease their rushing all the shoving and pushing and pause for a moment to see the season aglow Then they, all in wonder will hear the world thunder and the reasons for seasons is something they'll know Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
May the world cease their rushing all the shoving and pushing and pause for a moment to see the season aglow Nice thoughts Kethry, if only for a moment this could happen maybe the spirit of the holiday would return for some |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kethry...this is so beautiful! I loved the flow and feel to this... A keeper for my library... Thank you. ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, I love this, too. It's so beautiful. I like the Christmas colors, too. Into my library it goes.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
From across the world where it's sunning....this is terrific, Keth. It could easily be a Christmas carol it is so well done.....excellent construction and thought!  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Kethry, this is soooo beautiful. I would like to keep this, if you don't mind. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful rhyme scheme! *S* I love this, Kethry... well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well bless your britches! This is delicious! It's sweet and spicey And everything nicey! I loved this, Keth! Linda |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Keth lovely poem and very wonderful always I just wish we all were back in the states that’s all, nice and warm and not cold which it is in England very cold indeed. I could just see the snowmen lining up in rows don’t you. You are very special to me and so is the poem. Very well written  love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Kethry, this is wonderfully put together and the message just perfect. Into my library it goes  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
..and holiday smiles to you too--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - a happy holiday to you, writer of these lovely poems... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lynne, very well done....rhyme is superb and a happy to ya too.... BTW...did ya ever get any feedback on your sonnet you submitted.??/ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Yay! Oh Kethry, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and we all wish you the happiest holidays too, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful seasons greeting wish, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lynne, this is a keeper, adding to my collection  Have to agree with Deer....it could easily be a Christmas Carol.Maree |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Keth: What a tune you play...a dance to be danced for sure. Thanks for this one. TD |
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