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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-12-07 04:26 PM


“ONCE HER LOVER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Once long ago in the distant past,
I came upon a gypsy woman dancing,
black silk flowed down her waist
flowed onto her hips gently swaying…

Her shawl flowed into the air,
skirt high above the knees,
all on a bright moonlit night,
with breezes through the trees…

Romano woman, she ached,
passionate with loving desire,
longing for her lost lover,
sensuous by the warming fire…

Arms stretched out reaching,
she hypnotized me to compel,
this lovely gypsy woman calling,
cast me into her mystical spell…

Once long ago in the distant past,
there was a gypsy woman dancing,
I came to her, I was once her lover,
held her close again, with my yearning…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-12-07 04:41 PM


Bill,
it sounds like this memory was more than cold comfort. Well written.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2002-12-07 04:52 PM


You keep having these memories and you won't need mitts   nicely done Bill.


Seasons Greetings from Canada eh!
      

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amusemi
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3 posted 2002-12-07 05:08 PM


Awesome post Bill.


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4 posted 2002-12-07 05:28 PM


Bill, have you always been a hopeless romantic??  

I enjoyed your poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-12-07 06:12 PM


Oh such a romantic write Bill!!
So very very sensual...
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

regards2you
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6 posted 2002-12-07 08:40 PM




Bill,

Very descriptive; I could see her.
Enjoyed a great deal.


Warm regards, Pat


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        "Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2002-12-07 09:01 PM




though the dark haired gypsy stays on your soul, a blonde may cure your lovesick blues

vlraynes
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8 posted 2002-12-07 09:15 PM



Bill~
Lovely and romantic as always, my friend.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2002-12-07 10:18 PM


I liked reading this BC. You are such the master of romance.

Hugs to you, Marti

'A witty saying proves nothing.'
Voltaire (1694-1778)

Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2002-12-07 10:19 PM


Bill...How I enjoyed this gypsy tale of passion.  As always...your poems mesmorize.

***Ivy Rose

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11 posted 2002-12-08 02:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is soooooooo beautifully graceful, sweet friend, I just love gypsies too and this got me feeling like dancing! (big hugggssssss) May the whimsical beat always drum in your soul, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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