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Whispering To You
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Whispering To You |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHISPERING TO YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Listen to my voice in softness, feel it in all of its tenderness… Know it as it speaks to you, caress it warmly, let it accrue... Whispering to you is my desire, romancing you lights my fire… Forever would not be enough time, to lie here with you, as we rhyme… ~~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
pretty romantic stuff. Should have the women here swooning.. ( smiling) I enjoyed... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree, and your new style wears very gracefully on you....Don't change your clothes again... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
smiling at Magnus' remarks... you got us again ,Bill *swoon* zuperb romantica aloha, Cher Poetry is: |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, nice, but could you go all night? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Romantic, for sure, Bill! SWOON! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Bill~ You do romance so beautifully, my friend. This is just lovely.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hello BC ~ I'm so happy to see you; I've missed you and your wonderfully romantic words. Hugs, Marti 'A witty saying proves nothing.' |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Swooning here, too. Liked this a great deal. Quite romantic... Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness, Bill, this is really romantic.  Sounds like it'smeant for someone special?? BTW, where have you been?? I'm glad your back....... I missed you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Elimeno P Junior Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 17The only place I want to be! |
"...as we rhyme" Do you do that too? I like to rhyme! Simple, sweet. EP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bill... I've missed your romantic writes. Yeah....okay I 'swooned' too.  ~Hugs~ ~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The simplist expressions are the most powerful. Well done! ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, I have missed your gorgeous blues so much, I have had to go solo on the podium for a few weeks! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) Yay, let's rock together, yay, for we are the Troubadour Brothers, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ay love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Lovely write - you sure have all of the gals swooning. Between your gypsy poem and this one - you are going to have your door knocked down! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...This is such a beautiful and haunting poem. I can hear the soft whispers of your yearning in this wonderfully written poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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