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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-12-05 05:04 PM


You are there, here with me
but not within my sight
although so many miles away
your star still shines so bright.

You are there, here with me
in thoughts your held so dear
missing you, my heart is blue
it sheds a single tear.

You are there, here with me
in spirit never far apart
feelings felt and memories kept
bound together in the heart.

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-12-05 05:06 PM


So beautiful sweetie.
A challenge met head on and done very well too!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-12-05 05:33 PM


very nice, Donna
*s
M

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-05 08:18 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I wish for true loves happiness to always fill your heart and be with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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