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A Duet with a Muse
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A Duet with a Muse |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A Duet with a Muse You are there, here with Me Centering my soul's destiny Traced along curved lines so fair, What you saw is my heart bared. You are there, here with Me I am your thought's desire You remain my spark of fire Kismet was our chance of meet Fate now touches our heartbeat You are there, here with Me In my Where find Why of me As I look to you for certainty For you are caught in my inquire And I am yours in fond desire. You are there, here with Me In this our web of design Caught up in our own consign I am now your fancy, freed, You are there, here with Me ~*~ About a year ago, this was posted as a challenge for all worthy poets to write on the line, "You are there, here with Me". It would be nice to see this come again and Mysteria, thank you for reminding me how much you cherish this line... Have at it, Poets! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."I my Where find Why of Me"---innovative and brilliant! Totally delightful poem! Now, if only I could get my muse to sing a song such as this, with me! ~ good morning hugs! Linda |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
"In my Where, find Why of me." Love it! And the entire poem. So creative. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently expressed , yes I was only viewing the poem the other day , the one I wrote at the time with the line "You are there , here with me " Hope |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It is a great line...may try and play with it on my SNOW DAY!!!! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh yes, it is a great line, as were all the lines in this wonderful poem. I think I might try it, too....one day. Thank you for sharing this with us. "Love makes the world go around" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice..I don't remember that challenge *s M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
But you see...you are there, here with me, so that is a "good thing" and makes this easy to remember. I am so glad you re-posted this, this time I got it into my library. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I rememeber this challenge. Thank you for the gentle and loving reminder and thank you for the stunning presentation of that particular phrase. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And this is a very beautiful duet with one's muse....Well done to the two of you. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"Centering my soul's destiny"--touching write, love this line! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - a duet indeed with a Muse. Would you consider a writing duet with my Muse?... BC |
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