You are There Here With Me (For Lady In White's Challenge)2nd time around :)

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-12-07 04:24 PM

~* You Are There, Here With Me *~

You are there ~ here with me,
Dust to dust ~ but still I see.
Breath of wind ~ upon my face,
Inhaling memories ~ simple grace.

~*~

You are there ~ here with me,
Willow whispers ~ spirits free.
Reminiscence ~ gentle smile,
Warmth of heart ~ for a while.

~*~

You are there ~ here with me,
Pirouetting leaf ~ flying free.
Dancing round ~ morning’s dawn,
Celestial sign ~ you’re not gone.

~*~

You are there ~ here with me,
Half a whole ~ I’ll always be.
Through destiny ~ we’ll embrace,
Two friends held ~ in his grace.

~*~

You are there ~ here with me,
Two hearts entwined ~ forever WE.

~* In Memory of Jenna *~

~ You are there, here with me ~

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Seasons Greetings from Canada eh!
[This message has been edited by Mysteria (12-07-2002 05:15 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-07 04:27 PM

Mysteria - one beauty of a write...

BC

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-12-07 04:37 PM

Mysteria,
fabulous graphic, heartwrenching yet optimistic write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2002-12-07 05:06 PM

Thank you both, and Kethry, it just starts to get easier then a holiday comes, and it gets a little harder again, but that is what memories are for. Thank you and Happy Holidays too.

Season's Greetings from Canada eh!

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-12-07 05:12 PM

Sharon, this is a wonderful tribute to your friend.

Isn't it amazing how all of us can get so many different ideas from just a few words?
(the challenges, I mean)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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5 posted 2002-12-07 06:15 PM

Pirouetting leaf ~ flying free.
Dancing round ~ morning’s dawn

A beautiful dance and Wonderful imagery. Jenna is deeply honoured

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-12-07 06:22 PM

Beautiful Sharon....
A very blessed Christmas season to you and yours.
~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2002-12-07 10:21 PM

Sharon, this is so beautifully written and I love the graphic. A touching tribute.

Luv and Hugs, Marti

'A witty saying proves nothing.'
Voltaire (1694-1778)

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2002-12-07 10:28 PM

Sharon,

The graphic is magnificent. I love it!
The poem is equally fantastic.
So touching. My heart goes out to you for your loss. My best friend is closer to me than even my twin was.
So I can imagine....

May God give you strength always.
thank you for sharing this special person with us.

Hugs and with the warmest regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-12-08 08:51 AM

Jenna is smiling, my friend,
as will Lady.

There are a few lines in here
that would fit "there" in other poems,
you know...

each, a tribute, to your forever friend.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2002-12-08 09:05 AM

As soon as I saw the title next to your name....I knew who this would be about.
Every time you you write her in rhyme..she dances and shines for all to see.
The memories allow us to touch the warm.
heart-hugs Sharon-girlie

just one line ... one rhyme ... one metered verse ...
if only I could inspire in you ... promised poetic coerce.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-12-08 10:23 AM

Sharon,
Picture and write are a delight.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

12 posted 2002-12-08 10:27 AM

...so full of heart and song

Lyrically beautiful and with such a lilting cadence.

~ Warm wishes to you and your family

Linda

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2002-12-08 01:57 PM

You know I want to thank each of you as this is a terrible time of year for missing loved ones isn't it? She is all that is occupying my mind to be honest. Jenna was a Grandmother as of Monday 4:00 p.m. my time this week, (a girl, 8 lbs. 5 oz., Sorcha Faye Nolan.) He he, her Daddy passed out in the delivery room and will never live that down I am sure. I can't help but wonder if she knows, as that is all she ever wanted was to be as she called it, "A Harley Davidson Gramma." I am sorry I am rambling. Thank you all so much and by the way, I think this is about the only time I can ever "really" rhyme because I think she does the writing!
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