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Wind
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0 posted 2002-10-15 08:02 PM



They fell down from heaven while we slept
And in the morning we awoke
And did everything like usual
But when we went outside,
We thought we were dreaming
because there were clouls on the earth
~~         ~~~       ~~~~~       ~              ~       Wind        ~         ~~~~     ~     ~~             ~~~~          ~~~~~

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majnu
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1 posted 2002-10-15 08:20 PM


what a cute way to think about it!

out in the bay area it snows about once every decade (if we're lucky). i've never woken up to that, but this brings me part of the feeling i think.

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-15 09:08 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Neeraja
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3 posted 2003-03-09 10:12 AM


Simply beautiful!!!

Neeraja

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