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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-12-04 02:46 PM



~*~

On mountain summit,
Higher perspective is gained
~ Renewing spirits

~*~



[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-05-2002 03:38 PM).]

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scorpio
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1 posted 2002-12-04 02:56 PM


concisely eloquent...higher ground always is advantageous...well written..

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2002-12-04 03:15 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this is perfect and fitting for the Advent, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-12-04 03:20 PM


Hey Linda,
I've never been on a mountain top, except in my dreams.
Gary loves the mountains, though, so I'm sure I'll go
where they are one day. He loves the mountains in
Colorado and Tennessee, especially. I love the pictures he has.
BTW, I loved your poem, too!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

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4 posted 2002-12-04 04:46 PM


Until you fall....

Good write gal...as usual

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5 posted 2002-12-04 05:41 PM




I think it would be, too. This is very nice. Amazing how you can keep coming up with the variety of these. Love em' all.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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6 posted 2002-12-04 06:03 PM


Very nice Linda, short and sweet. Sometimes we fail to see the big picture.

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-04-2002 06:30 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-12-04 07:09 PM


Beautiful...very nicely done!
~Hugs~

~ Life is too short not to believe in Santa Claus ~

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8 posted 2002-12-04 07:21 PM


Short but sweet. Wonderful poem!
Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
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9 posted 2002-12-04 11:09 PM



LOL @ Toe.

Earth Angel~
This is beautifully said.
I enjoyed the read.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2002-12-05 08:38 AM


Scorpio  ~

"Concisely eloquent"--as was your reply! Thank  you!
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Noah  ~

Thank you for the kind words, dear one!
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~ Go to the top of a mountain, if not physically, then go there through creative visualization, and you will see forever...

Linda

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11 posted 2002-12-05 08:55 AM


Ethel  ~

When I was going through a very difficult time, my girlfriend who had moved to Calgary,
flew out here to Ontario, to be with me. She then purchased a round-trip ticket for me as a surprise and took me back with her, took an extra week off work and pampered me to bring me back to the land of the living! Since I am self-employed, I was able to swing the two weeks we spent together (one week here and one week there). She took me to Banff and up into the mountains where life was breathed back into my inner being by the winds of God and by the breath-taking majesty of his natural wonders. Within moments, my problems became miniscule. The joy I had been missing, returned and I was once again filled with a zest for living.

From the summit of that mountain, I gained a higher perspective, and my spirits were renewed.

~ May you soon experience the splendor of being on a mountaintop

Warm hugs,
Linda

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12 posted 2002-12-05 08:59 AM


Toe  ~

If you were near, and I was to fall, I know that you, Sir Toe Galahad, would catch me!

~ Knight! Knight!

EA

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13 posted 2002-12-05 09:05 AM


Pat  ~

If you love what you do, and it is an expression of your inner self, it becomes effortless and will also bring you joy. I do have a passion for writing this form of poetry, and I write them everyday!

~ May joy and laughter follow you all the days of your life

Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-05-2002 10:02 AM).]

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2002-12-05 09:15 AM


Raph  ~

What you say, is so true! We get caught up in our microcosmic worlds and become lost in the minutia with no vision for the future.
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Enchantress  ~

Thank you! I appreciate your saying so!
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WinterWren  ~

"Laugh often, love much, live well"--I like that! Thank you!...and likewise!
*********************************************

Vicky  ~

I enjoyed reading your reply! And yes, Toe is most definitely an adorable piece of work! hehe
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~ Remember, that in a blink of an eye, you can transport yourself to the summit of any mountain...Just dare to dream

Linda

NewEnglandlazurlu
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15 posted 2002-12-05 09:40 AM


When I pray, God always sends me to a mountain top! It is amazing what I find there.

Spectacular in thought and word dear lady.

Hugs, Marti

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16 posted 2002-12-05 09:54 AM


Marti  ~

I knew that you would have such experiences, dear 'M'!

Thank you for your kind and loving words. They were very special to me.

~ Perhaps when we do finally meet, it will be on a mountaintop!

~ sisterly hugs
Linda

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17 posted 2002-12-05 05:07 PM


' ....  Perhaps when we do finally meet, it will be on a mountaintop! ...'

You never know!  It will certainly be a celestial celebration of joy and laughter wherever we are!

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18 posted 2002-12-05 06:06 PM


Beautiful!!

Charisma

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19 posted 2002-12-06 08:35 AM


Marti  ~

..."a celestial celebration of joy and laughter!"--it most certainly WILL be--for we truly are going to meet one day---remember our dream of chatting all day under an elm tree, sipping lemonade on a beautiful summer's day!---then we'll go to a mountain top and get caught up on each other's lives!

~ In the meantime let's continue to enjoy our morning cyber tea clatches!

~ huggles
Linda

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2002-12-06 08:38 AM


Charisma  ~

I believe I may have mentioned to you before that I love your "charismatic" name, well it bears repeating--I love it! It is so charming!
Thank you for the "beautiful" reply!

~ Enjoy your day!
hugs
EA

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