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SmartChick
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0 posted 2002-12-04 01:06 PM


To give all the love
You carry inside your heart
Just gets it broken



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garysgirl
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1 posted 2002-12-04 01:15 PM


Oh, I could feel the hurt in this one, sweet Sue.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~
                  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-12-04 01:45 PM


SmartChick
That doesn't leave room for much. LOL enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-12-04 01:48 PM


The trick, Sweet Sue, is not to give all the love that is in your heart! You must keep some for yourself...

~ sending you some love, that is just for you, to store in your heart...

Love,
Linda

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-12-04 01:52 PM


Ouch! Sweet Sue, this one is very painful. I have to agree with Earth Angel ... keep some of that love for yourself.

Hugs dear one ... Marti

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